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And Then

 

She posed the shingle

And the rusted tack

 

The while I hammered in …

The stubby pin,

 

A thing for which

I have no knack,

 

And then her thumb …

 

And broke the piece

(And then the peace).

 

Boy! was she dumb.

— barbsdad2003, Aug 11, 2007

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Rottiestyl

Rottiestyl

18 years 10 months ago

LOL!

NOW THAT, is something I can relate to! I needed that laugh my friend. Just loved the humor. K. Mulroney

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