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Aug 11, 2007
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And Then
She posed the shingle
And the rusted tack
The while I hammered in …
The stubby pin,
A thing for which
I have no knack,
And then her thumb …
And broke the piece
(And then the peace).
Boy! was she dumb.
— barbsdad2003, Aug 11, 2007
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Rottiestyl
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