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barbsdad2003
Aug 13, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

to mock great flocks

 

dark shapes rise up

in falling night

 

and that to mock great

flocks of resting birds,

 

thus causing them

to lose some sleep …

 

and then at morn to join

in groggy flight.

— barbsdad2003, Aug 13, 2007

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ladywriter

18 years 10 months ago

To Mock Great Flocks

Chuck, I had read this one last night, and related to it very well. Now I can put the name Chuck to it. I read the one regarding your son also. Very nicely done. ladywriter
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Excellent as Always

I really like this - read it several times this morning - it made me think. This is great writing and as always aa joy to read. Kaz x
Mark

Mark

18 years 10 months ago

Oh Yes!

A very groggy flight in the morning ! Great one Chuck, always a pleasure to swim alone here at 2 AM when I can and catch up on these jewels (just hope I'm not swimming alone tomorrow)

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