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Aug 16, 2007
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Fools of Summer
Summer’s Phoebus baked
As fearful aspens quaked.
Carp dithered one by one
In deep dark pools.
Small children waked
At early morns to play
Quite straightaway
In hotly flaring sun
All days like fools.
— barbsdad2003, Aug 16, 2007
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weirdelf
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I don't like how we have made this beautiful world
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