Katydid

Indeed she did on my little cracked windshield she pleased me. Katydid, green and winged she surprised me, Katyshe, little wing and green. Mission? Miss me? Indeed she confused me she, Katydid.

— Conect11, Aug 17, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

This sounds a tad barbsdaddy 8)

that's a compliment and in no ways suggests emulation. Cool. cheers, Jess

barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

OK, OK

Enough already! I can tell you're having way-y-y too much fun! Thanx, Chuck

Quillsvein1

18 years 9 months ago

Language

poetry, i think? i'm going to take a big risk here and intuit that this poem is about a bird that splattered on your windshield. at any rate, an interesting piece.

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