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Ill Be There
as the years pass your hair will start to gray.
but ill be there to hold you as time passes away.
as friends come and go one thing will stay the same.
that ill be there to love you as much as the day you took my name.
we will have problems just as all couples do.
but out love is unconditonal it will be there to see us through.
if ever you feel our love start to fade.
our love will be there to show you we have it made.
when your feeling low and your having a bad day.
ill be there with you to kiss the pain away.
i may not always say the right thing.
but ill be there to pick you the sweet flowers of spring.
when you feel that you have let me down.
ill be there to show you your wedding day gown.
ill be there to run my fingers through your hair.
ill be there to love you here,there,everywhere.
Critiques
TONI SEARS
18 years 9 months ago
I'll be there
Julie50
18 years 8 months ago
Getting older
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