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Aug 23, 2007
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I just wish that he knew
Long black hair in his eyes
I know that he’s trying not to cry
He tells me all his hopes and fears
Some of the hardest things I’ve had to hear
He thinks he’s a loser but he has no clue
I just wish he knew…
He has saved me from my darkest hours
Gave me hugs and brought me flowers
My bones were broken and I was scared
He was there to fix my hair
I was hurt and betrayed
He taught me how to trust and be brave
His hands are shaking
He tells me of his dreams he can’t achieve
About all the things he wants and needs
He says he’s worthless and wasting time
I hope he knows I’m glad he’s mine
He’s sweet and smart
From him I wo’nt part
He’s the one closest to my heart
His love has enslaved me
He’s my angel sent to save me
I only wish that he knew…
— evil18angel, Aug 23, 2007
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