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Show Some Grace

 

That poor old filly standing slumped

At horses’ drinking trough

 

Appears in thought a long way off.

 

She’s feeling out of sorts

And hacks a nagging cough.

 

If I were you, I would show levity,

Some heartfelt charity,

 

Some aptly fitting grace …

And would not wholly scoff.

 

— barbsdad2003, Sep 06, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

eeek!

have you read or seen about the horse flu epidemic in Australia? cheers, Jess

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