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All at Once Agog

 

The dawn’s green glistening grass

Alying under pressing morning’s fog

 

At edge of rancid woodland’s bog

That quite reflects like sultry looking glass

 

So makes the longtime dormant shrooms—

And their attendant biomass—

 

To lie hopeful, eager, happy …

And then at once to bloom agog.

 

— barbsdad2003, Sep 08, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

as usual, agog

you evoke so much with so few words, one of my chief loves of poetry. cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 9 months ago

you

continually humble me with your works, Chuck. I am agape, not agog! Mark W.

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