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IKnowNoBox
Sep 14, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Adrift(haiku)

Oh that ebb and flow

it takes me to,takes me fro

driftwood in the sea

 

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 14, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Conect11

18 years 9 months ago

I have

been enjoying your recent experimentation with different forms. Have especially liked your haiku. A good, serene work here that bobbles along peacefully. Mark W. p.s. go with "takes" for the home line

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