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Sep 15, 2007
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April
My heart breaks
thinking of you in this beautiful box
with its marble and brass
your "forever" earth home
My last words were " I Love you"
Did you hear me?
Could you feel me by your bedside
rubbing your beautiful hair ,that I have now
neatly in a bag on my dresser
The only part of the real you I have left
MY HEART BREAKS
thinking of you in this beautiful box
with its marble and brass
your "forever" earth home
— JulieMcCarty, Sep 15, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 9 months ago
One of the things that makes me a lousy critic
Frost Smith
18 years 9 months ago
You did not ask for
IKnowNoBox
18 years 9 months ago
....
JulieMcCarty
18 years 9 months ago
Thank you
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