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IKnowNoBox
Sep 16, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Think Before you Insult

You best be prepared

if you so dare,

to demean

any man,

dirty with mange

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 16, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

dirty with mange ....

mange a person so dirty their hair is falling out. A person that has no self preservation and is already pestered by an itchy disposition. Thank you stay tuned. in ink, Dabbler
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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

direct,

which is different than "to the point." This is direct, and true. Mark W.
Frost Smith

Frost Smith

18 years 8 months ago

Simple, to the point, and so very true...

Thats the problem; people don't think before they act, or react; I am very purposeful in what I do; thats not to say that I am not guilty of both, but I tend to have a bigger problem with reacting.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

to demean

is to avoid understanding.Thank you for the visit to my poem. In ink, David
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Thank you Cat

as a vet nurse I am sure you are aware how sensitive mange makes it's suffer. In ink, Dabbler
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

Oh Yes...

Sensitive and sometimes the discomfort can make one angry... all the more reason to be kind and understanding. Best Wishes, Wolfy.

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