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barbsdad2003
Sep 17, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My! My!

 

Much to my dread

And to my chagrin

 

Quite from the bottom of

 

My oh-so-single chin—

Oh, my! oh, my!—

 

The pewter sky

Has turned to lead.

 

So! what the hell!

I think I’d do quite well

 

If I’d go back to bed.

 

— barbsdad2003, Sep 17, 2007

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

The morning I first read this ,I was in that

same place,so I had to return on a better day,(that happens to be raining. I have an attraction for poems that set atmosphere,and mood in humor,especially the routine stuff,like getting up in the morning (as if we had a choice.)lol In ink. Dabbler P.s. Escape Artist,one and all,Look Toward the Horizon,and Beyond.

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