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Conect11
Sep 26, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Piss and Vinegar, Please

 I swear I’ve got little timeto be filled with this shitthis pissand vinegarand sand,man.I swearI’m there,completely up to where?Here,face up,point up,get the point?Fed up,pull upgetO - U  - T outand do it now!Escape,entertainlet me complainbout the thoughtlet it rainrain,no,I don’t have a bit of shame.Let me see…what kind of negative energydo I want to feed tonight?That’s all you gotall you can surround me withfill me with, deceive me with.If I took your adviceI’d be a nobody,burned out,deadindeedinside.So no,no more,no more I said.No,no more.No more f*cking questions,please.Live and let me be.  
— Conect11, Sep 26, 2007
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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

work

my boss is a tool. Whose isn't? Mark W.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

My former assistant Manager Became my Nemisis

and on top of that,the company was negligent in there response. A common thread we share friend. A tool of a boss I can bare, A neglected work place is expected, However the two together ,I had to GO! and even as I suffer the consequence, I am in the better. In ink, David
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Be good at Job, but Personality Douces...

fine by me ,and dare I say most.Visa versa,still fine by me (it only takes good employees to balance it out.) But combined to be both THAT "BOSS" Gotta Go! In ink, IKnowNoBoss (for now)
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Be good at Job, but Personality Douces...

fine by me ,and dare I say most.Visa versa,still fine by me (it only takes good employees to balance it out.) But combined to be both THAT "BOSS" Gotta Go! In ink, IKnowNoBoss (for now)
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 4 months ago

wow, Mark

What a title. And what a scathing poem! Sure don't want to see the business end of your boss's ass after that poetic reaming, but sometimes you just have to let it all out. One correction: I don't got a bit of shame -> I don't have. Sorry, my friend, but that was like nails on a chalkboard to me. Good angry write. You really pumped it full of energy, and got the point across well. I see this was 2007, hopefully you're not still in this situation. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Handle every situation like a dog: if you can't eat it, or screw it, piss on it and walk away!"
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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

lol no

long gone from it. Thanks for the correction and the read! Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

Re: bosses and tools

My boss is not a tool. Tools are useful. Nice write! Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

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