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IKnowNoBox

Oct 01, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Inspiration (haiku)

breeze in deep cavern

caressing glowing embers

a changing vision

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 01, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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18 years 8 months ago

Quite pleasant

Very enjoyable David ! I wonder why Caressing is capped?

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18 years 8 months ago

i cant write a haiku about marshes

because Im so bogged down thanks for stopping by stay tuned. In ink, David

18 years 8 months ago

Well

And Live - that seems to be a blatent challenge lmao Thanks so much, Mark

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18 years 8 months ago

hmm

pleasant yet pedestrian. Was this from a life experience, or did you decide to write a haiku? Mark W.

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18 years 8 months ago

thank you mark

I would say inspiration is a daily part of my life giving and receiving. In ink, David

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18 years 8 months ago

Yes I have sat at such a fire.

With a Diggery Do(sic)player by the ocean. Much better then telivision. In ink,

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searchursoul

18 years 8 months ago

Love It!

This is amazing! Beautifully said. I pictured myself in a cavern, soul searching, hanging onto hope and realizing, finally, that I have a different point of view. Love that it's so short. Well done!

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18 years 8 months ago

Thank you soul search

May you inspire ,and be inspired. I really found Haiku again here at neopoet. In ink, David

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