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Michael Landau
Oct 05, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

La jeunesse ( Youth)

Visions floating in airInnocence frozen in timeInsects trapped in amberWindows to bygone days
— Michael Landau, Oct 05, 2007
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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 9 months ago

I can be completely stupid as you know

(now I am insulting me instead of you) I totally missed the point of this poem. I may claim to have some knowledge of poetry but I am also a half-crazed Latvian dwarf with an ice pick. I get it now. So glad I re-read it. cheers, Jess

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