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Oct 08, 2007
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our cart in senseless place afore the horse
it seems to me
much evidently
(of course! of course!)
our cart doth run
here fore the horse.
why? why?
why do we seek
sagacious life,
a theme so running rife
(oh, my! I cry),
as tenanting a brother/sister
star or planetary bod?
oh the scam! the smirching fraud!
that we must look thus far abroad
the when it doth appear
we’ve yet to find a sign of it
on this fine comely planet here.
— barbsdad2003, Oct 08, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
Center stage for casting call
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
Perfectly said.
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