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A Beautiful Place

I am breathless with the magnificence of Your splendor

Up here, I can actually breathe.

Wind whipping, trying to blow me away.

I am blown away,

In awe…

Of this place.

 

I take in every sight and every smell,

Hoping I do not ever have to leave this magical paradise.

The colors will forever be burned into my mind, Into my heart, and my soul.

Here…

I can be whole.

 

Golden colors, mountains that stretch into the sky,

Spruce trees of every shape and size.

Elk running gracefully across the road.

Somehow, this majesty…

Lightens my load.

 

This is the place that only lives in my dreams.

So many questions…

How can I be here forever,

Until I slip into eternity,

Because here…

I am free.

 

Catherine M. Howell

10/8/07

 

 

— wolfycat, Oct 10, 2007

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Mark

Mark

18 years 8 months ago

Catherine on the surface

your poem takes me to the white mountains of New Hampshire two years ago when I hiked the Kangamangus Trail alone. It took two days and was one of my all time favorite experiences. Just breathing the mountain air is worth it. Wherever you really want to be and get there is another demension to this poetry :-) Thanks, Mark
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

A Beautiful Place

Mark, Thanks for much for reading my poem and commenting! Chama, New Mexico is where I hope to be someday soon. We had to drive through kind of fast...but I stopped as much as possible! Thanks again, Cathy
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

This piece glows with the numinous

exactly as I experience it. Although I never call it god. Beautifully and powerfully evocative. This vast land Down Under is haunted by ancient spirits of great power and aloofness. cheers, Jess
wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

A Beautiful Place

Hello Jess, Thanks for appreciating my poem. And thank you so much for leaving me a comment. Standing at the summit of the mountain range left me breathless and brought tears to my eyes...it was so beautiful! Best Wishes, Cathy

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