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barbsdad2003
Oct 10, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

ah, my frequent-dimmered, inscient light

 

ah, so! if only it were viable

(if given, then at least reliable)

 

thus that my frequent-dimmered, inscient light

would hold itself quite firm on maxi-bright

 

as crying, frantic, urgent need arose

in daily term enow for me to write.

 

— barbsdad2003, Oct 10, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

A perfect little poem

I do so admire your wordcraftsmanship. You sent me scuttling to the Oxford yet again and inscient really makes it. (I just added it to the NeoPoet dictionary) But, dear Chuck, have you given yourself away? If the dimmering is power related, ok, but green globes must never be dimmered, I suspect you are not being green correct. cheers, Jess

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