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Sleep will not come easily

I'm in the process of submitting poems to magazines and therefore deleting them. They may be up again later.

— Ink Dragon, Oct 13, 2007

Critiques

IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

A polerized use of the form Dragon well done and the use ....

of the word Charm in the titles is most ingenious. I so envy this Charm project Dragon. In crayon, Dabbler

Ink Dragon

18 years 8 months ago

Don´t be envious

but feel free to pick up the underlying idea! I invite everyone here at neopoet to try a charm or two! They needn´t be acrostic, but they must be rather short, like haikus, tankas, limericks. Free choice of subject! I´m looking forward to everyone´s creative ideas on that project!!! ID

jacks

18 years 8 months ago

I like the “price tag

I like the "price tag attached" line. It would seem financial issues=insomnia for most people. Jackson

Ink Dragon

18 years 8 months ago

taken literally

it is financial issues, but it is also supposed to be metaphorical...intentional ambiguity! Regards, ID

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