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For Tickles

I meet a shy girl

tear filled eye girl

simple reply girl

       ***

you made me sigh girl

naughty surprise girl

I wink my eye girl

 

— IKnowNoBox, Oct 14, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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wolfycat

wolfycat

18 years 8 months ago

Playful...

David, You wrote a lighthearted poem. It has a freespirited feel to it and I love it! Wolfy.
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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 8 months ago

^.^

i like this poem.

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