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Oct 16, 2007
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Excuse Me
The gentle waves,
are breathing,
A man,
his chest is heaving,
A spiders web,
he’s weaving,
Excuse me,
I was just leaving.
There are those,
who’ve been deceiving,
There are truths,
proved unbelieving,
Yet,you’re blind,
to what you’re seeing,
Excuse me,
I was just leaving.
Condemnation,
is not redeeming,
Judgment,
is what it’s seeming,
With rage,
your heart is teeming,
Excuse me,
I was just leaving.
— Calliope, Oct 16, 2007
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