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Oct 17, 2007
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Walking with Shadows
I walked alone.
My only companion,a shadow.
A shadow I was not sure belonged to me,
So unfamiliar this shadow was.
And yet ,this shadow was my only friend.
This shadow seemed cold at times.
As if it resented this lonely walk.
I was not sure I disagreed.
— Calliope, Oct 17, 2007
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Ancientone
18 years 8 months ago
Very shadowy one, hehe!
Calliope
18 years 8 months ago
To your wondering...
Ancientone
18 years 8 months ago
You are quite welcome!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
Yes the structure works with the Theme
Calliope
18 years 7 months ago
Thank you NOBox
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
Lonely walk
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