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Oct 20, 2007
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Wouldn't It Be Wonderful If ...
Wouldn't It Be Wonderful If ...
A vagrant fly at rest
On planted spindly legs
Were fitly termed instead
A stock-still crouch or stand.
— barbsdad2003, Oct 20, 2007
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Mark
18 years 7 months ago
Yes
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18 years 7 months ago
Seeing in many eyes
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