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Sinbadthesailorman
Sinbadthesailorman
Oct 20, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

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A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man


— Sinbadthesailorman, Oct 20, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Mark

Mark

18 years 7 months ago

Sinbad, what stuff?

if you mean poetry it is all over the web. I think your poem is cool. She dumped you, oh well be as shallow as her for yourself and go looking man :-) Good luck, Mark
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 4 months ago

You know I didn't catch on to the site

its is so well thought out But, I have been so lost of late, these replys button and the rest I feel like an idiot well Im going back through to try to cacth up on replys as my computer died today it comes on the just stops the power lite is on but every thing esle is dead wont be posting till I can figure it out Tanx for your remarks Mark so I didn't quite have a grasp of the site for some time
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

Forgotten

Ouch I know the Big Red Truck,the soon to come girl will be a salve for the wounds you feel,let the healing begin. In ink, Dabbler
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 6 months ago

Soon to come girl where do you find them

when your are not looking I guess I just got lucky a few drunken nights but I am too picky I guess have the bad habit of comparing her to them and they just don't measure up for I'm using a diferent scale I beleive In fate or a least I think I do
Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Suspend

Suspend your judgement :)
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

whatever else it means, donnie, I feel your pain

but you have got to fix one bad spelling error One in which you will not udder my name [udder is where cows milk comes from, surely you meant utter, unless you were really meaning to call her a cow] Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 2 months ago

Was hinting at Milking squeezing it out of her, my name

I'll leave it for awhile yet, I know it is a Cows Udder I can always Change But not just yet, I for some reason like this use here I don't fully understand just yet why, I do have short term memory problems and have Forgoten many things But I am still trying to recall why I did use this word instead of utter But I still like the use of it here and now and No I wasn't calling any one a cow never unless they were and this she is not!! Donnie/Sinbad
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Ananzi

15 years 11 months ago

Donnie!

I think this poem is epic! I know what you mean about using different scales. Its hard not to judge a person by people from your past. I had so many issues with previous relationships, but I reckon I may have found the one where scales don't come into it. Your imagery in this one, and your acute grasp of the relationship itself is incredible!

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