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Oct 23, 2007
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to splash a slivered light on space-time theory
time, so lacking feckless angel's grace,
she grabs unsteady place
athwart her inner/outer space ...
and space her candid moment in thick time
as she so makes her staunchly uphill climb.
so when we stretch our food intake
sans application of unvarnished bar or brake---
as we our hopeless health forsake---
we burgeon waisted girth post-birth
o'er boundless, spanning space
of fatly rounded pregnant time.
— barbsdad2003, Oct 23, 2007
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