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barbsdad2003
Oct 31, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

cat>dog (haiku)

 

a cat lies atop

that gilt-sunlit windowsill---

no, no, it's a dog!

 

— barbsdad2003, Oct 31, 2007

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barbsdad2003

18 years 7 months ago

I'm So Pleased ...

that you spotted the intended, at least slightly self-deprecating humor here. And garnering such a refreshing compliment from a regular writer of haiku (meaning you, of course) makes it all the sweeter. Thanx, Chuck

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