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Oct 31, 2007
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Girl Without a Veil
Dropped along the ridden path,
Was once an object a lady hath,
Tossed aside through an open carriage,
Never made it to the marriage,
A veil unveiled without a thought,
By a peasant girl the veil was caught,
Made new again with love and care,
Set atop the peasants hair,
Worn along the aisle of love,
Guided by those from up above.
— Calliope, Oct 31, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
You had me at the Title and opening line
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