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MOKSHA [FREE FROM ALLL CLUTCHES]

    MOKSHA  [ FREE FROM ALL CLUTCHES]

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Come to pray  to lead your soul

towards the happiest world

No painful birth life to our souls only

happy  and pleasures  in his palace

To reach his palace,

Ruin your greed and envy

spend everything for others

shed your blood and tears for others pains

Rush to rescue others from this hell

Purify your heart as milk and as dew

to place His grace  and mercy

Go deeper in to you and

discover the miracles in your depth

Your God and angels  are waiting

to invite you in their world.

There is Moksha [freed soul from all clutches]

 

Sakthi ravichandran

 

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 02, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

Why be free of lust, which

Why be free of lust, which is just a moralistic term for sexual desire? Why be freed of affection and love? Moksha sounds like the Pope to me. I prefer humanity. Clutches are the words used by religion to keep the oppressed from becoming politically active and changing the world for the better. I love you Shaktee and also love Mark, conect11. And we all 3 have different beliefs, but will not stop challenging you, or him. with repect, Jess

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