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Chamomile Lag Far ...

 

Food-deprived too overlong, I hunger, 

Therefore can't last much if any longer ...

 

Then I mark a distant knelling gonger;

Then I note a corkscrewed orange rind---

 

And since it's way past snacking/eating time,

Now maybe chamomile lag far behind?

 

— barbsdad2003, Nov 02, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

O I feel for you Chuck

an imminently giving up all greasy bad foods, drugs and absolutely no other sins. cheers, Jess

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