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barbsdad2003
Nov 06, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Not Enough

 

On this arctic morn

I rise to quick adorn

 

For warmth some clothes

That I do not suppose

 

Clasp quite sufficiently enough

To supersede my typic early autumn fluff.

 

— barbsdad2003, Nov 06, 2007

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Mark

Mark

18 years 7 months ago

i'm off to work at 3 AM

gloves and a hat now I think a scarf for my chin as ice on the jalopy makes the first mile's drive oh so sloppy (and chilled) :-)
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barbsdad2003

18 years 7 months ago

To Work at Three?

Wow! And I often brag to long-suffering friends of my early-morning rise ... at 5 a.m. But then for me that's the best time for versifying. Regards, Chuck
Mark

Mark

18 years 7 months ago

at 5 I'm fried

but around four it seems an open door for ideas and scribbles and on the other four when I am lids up surely I am versified by 5 we are on the opposite end of our mind zones no wonder our music has different song tones and my sort of comment verse next to you is a bit worse but certainly there are points for every good effort in hardly trying. My days of early rising are passe as I push the clock always it is my nature or the natural result from past early rising :-) Much respect, Mark PS: moved the de-icer from the house to the car lmao

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