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Three Words
The night had brought the cold
And the hand in mine
The snow had fallen
A perfect layer of unbroken white
The horizon brought a contrast of white and black
As the sky was lined with stars
And random clouds that turned to a deep gray with the moon light
The snow glittered with its crystals
And in your eyes I saw mine
Like diamonds in the night sky
Reflecting all that they see
A heart with scars
And a hand that trembles
Dark eyes with the loss of trust
The frequent fear of being left behind
But these feelings have faded
Being blocked by your heart
The early sunrise
Our words took shapes as they flowed in clouds from out mouths
Over the frozen lake, the orange sun is reflected on the ice
The sky comes to life as the days change
But every moment feels the same in your eyes
As if time has stopped, and waited for us
Those three words flow from your lips like a simple melody
I can’t help but smile, since your love has saved me
The kiss from your lips, the taste remains for days
And in my mind I can still feel you there
Laying with me even when I am miles away
But no matter how far I get
You will always be with me
One simple word can’t explain my feelings for you
Critiques
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Am am all a buzz from caffine
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