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poet's ascent

 

the clever,

able poet

blithe ascends

the quite high

Ev'rest's peak

up there

 

to rough

gaunt verse---

but one or two---

extreme from

notably

t h i n ... air.

 

— barbsdad2003, Nov 13, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

I this thin air

which you manage to make quite breathable you succinctly say what we all must cheers, Jess

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