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Nov 13, 2007
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poet's ascent
the clever,
able poet
blithe ascends
the quite high
Ev'rest's peak
up there
to rough
gaunt verse---
but one or two---
extreme from
notably
t h i n ... air.
— barbsdad2003, Nov 13, 2007
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I this thin air
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