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Nov 15, 2007
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No, No!
Tutor not a man
Unduly firm
To halter
Or to altar---
Save at first he yields
To such direction.
— barbsdad2003, Nov 15, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 7 months ago
A man unduly firm not amenable to tutoring?
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 7 months ago
Nice
barbsdad2003
18 years 6 months ago
I think I ought to mention that ...
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
A stern word for correction.
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