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Just Go! Go!

 

This roughish weather's

Just got to go

 

For to make plenty room,

As you all know,

 

For to accommodate

Yet soon enough

 

The winter's coming

Trenchant, manly stuff.

 

— barbsdad2003, Nov 19, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

Your poem oddly apposite

Your poem oddly apposite considering opposite seasons. With large impending party in tiny abode, inclement weather would impose trenchant, manly efforts erecting marquis or other shelter. cheers, Jess

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