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Nov 20, 2007
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Fer to Kill
Laurel held her mineral heart
At times chameleon gold;
It was then swapped to stone
So very wintry cold.
But wait! for just a moment ...
It just might could switch to silver
Almost any man would kill fer.
— barbsdad2003, Nov 20, 2007
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Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 6 months ago
I think I would
barbsdad2003
18 years 6 months ago
Here Alone ...
weirdelf
18 years 6 months ago
Once again I must call you to task,
barbsdad2003
18 years 6 months ago
I Do Think, My Dear Jess ...
weirdelf
18 years 6 months ago
Oh Chuck, I was teasing you!
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