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barbsdad2003
Nov 26, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Sea Lies About ...

 

Alas! there lies about

and deep within us

 

All ... a sea of primed

and cogent knowledge

 

Bogus out of reach,

its wonders unobtained;

 

Such might as well be gone ...

 

For all the useless good

that it may do or does ...

 

The unenlightened lot of us.

 

— barbsdad2003, Nov 26, 2007

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dbrock

18 years 6 months ago

I never quite know how to

I never quite know how to comment on your work. I usually have to read a couple of times over before my DUH brain gets it! ...i got this one :) Sometimes I feel like a bunch of useless information! This one reached me - god, I'm slow at times, Chuck blessings, donna
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meic

18 years 6 months ago

Oh I do so know what

Oh I do so know what you're alluding to - and a thoroughly entertaining piece to boot! Mike
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 6 months ago

O do well to

sometimes Me thinks Am smart and other times I knows its The wealth when shared and not thrust upon is so apprecatied thanx Donnie I so envy the smiple line that most here on this site seem to have I can't seem to smiplifie the thought A curse or a blessing I do not know Yet. keep sailing Donnie

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