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Nov 28, 2007
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Almost twice the man I was at 20
with double the responsability
but only half the time left to enjoy
neglecting said responsability
where I am heading still
I do not know but along the way
i hope the fun I had shows
and if I need insight
(which I am sure I will)
I have twice as many people
I know who can give it
to me straight
— IKnowNoBox, Nov 28, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 5 months ago
Damn right!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
Cheers!8
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