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Almost twice the man I was at 20

with double the responsability

but only half the time left to enjoy

neglecting said responsability

where I am heading still

I do not know but along the way

i hope the fun I had shows

and if I need insight

(which I am sure I will)

I have twice as many people

I know who can give it

to me straight

— IKnowNoBox, Nov 28, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Damn right!

Even new friends,like me,if good friends, will give it to you straight. cheers, Jess

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