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Somethin' Ain't Right

 

Oh, dear,

I fear---

 

And that without delight

Or quite so much as bloomin' spite---

 

It's dreary clear

That somethin' ain't so quite all right

 

Right here.

 

— barbsdad2003, Nov 29, 2007

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Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Nice and tight

right here things seem in a new light top bright wide and cleared sight what could be wrong?

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