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meic
Nov 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

AWAYDAYS

AWAYDAYS   Remembering you my heart is a pebble skimmed over water.   Reaching for you my hand is a traveller lost in the miles   Thinking of you I count absent days and then [O then] the days to our meeting    
— meic, Nov 30, 2007
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meic

18 years 6 months ago

Thank you so much. I’m

Thank you so much. I'm quite fond of this one. It was one of a series called Barriers - circumstances which place obstacles in the way of developning loving relationships i.e. distance, the age gap, marital status etc. I may well post the others at some time. Pout? Hmm. Mike
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meic

18 years 6 months ago

Yup. Marital status I asked

Yup. Marital status I asked for people [on another site] to suggest particular situations / circumstances which acted as a barrier to one of their own romances. This was one suggestion [from a woman, btw]. I was more than a little surprised, but I gave it a try. Mike

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