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The Grin From Venus

I met a woman, today.

She was from Venus, and knew her language.....well.

I was lost in two different ways.

First, I was lost.....linguistically. Crippled, were my mouth muscles.

Then, I was lost with every syllable that she uttered.

 

In turn, I tried honoring her with MY favorite syllables.

I repeatedly uttered the syllables, "aughh".....and "unghh"...

..until I regrouped. At least I made her smile,

and what a smile she possessed!

Her eyes, combined with her chin, created.....The Grin!

 

And though I could only say, "...your name?", "how is the chicken?",

and, "where to the potty?".....we both new the language of the grin.

It's the precursor to every laugh, the explosion following every smile,

and a piece of life that we both adored.

 

And so, we grinned. And we never tired.

A few times, when her grin threatened to fade,

her smiley-eyes refreshed the muscles in her soul,

and her grin returned.....giving new strength to mine.

Lucky on my part, that I knew a little of the language.....of the Venutians.

 

— docmaverick, Dec 01, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Calliope

18 years 6 months ago

Very Nice piece

Body language is understood all over the world,there is always a look in the eyes that tells all. Good job, Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Bloody superb!

Fuck high falutin poetry, you have captured a piece of life than anyone but a sociopath could relate to. Great work cheers, Jess

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