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meic
Dec 02, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SEE-SAW

SEE-SAW

See-saw
twinned, counterbalanced
you and I. So high
you take me. So deep
within you
rocking, rocking.

See-saw
'twixt then and when
flits fleeting now
we reach, touch; grasp, clutch
fingers locked but
slipping, slipping.

See-saw
the very word[s]
tell[s] the tale: a vision
is a mere hyphen away
from a memory
passing, passing.

 

 
— meic, Dec 02, 2007
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theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 6 months ago

in awe of mastered words

you make me wonder how it happens...how every time you catch me off guard and i am suprised but not at all. "See-Saw...is a mere hyphen away, from a memory, passing, passing." the term beautiful would come close, were it not so minimal... <3 Emarie

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