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SUPPLICATION

SUPPLICATION   Tread not warily my soft one for flowers may grow in your footsteps.   Sing not softly my sweet one for petals may dance on your song.   Touch not tamely my dear one for perfume may trail your caress   Be not fearful my loved one for blossoms may spring as you pass    
— meic, Dec 03, 2007

Critiques

theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 6 months ago

where the blue roses grow...

"Tread not warily my soft one for flowers may grow in your footsteps"... need one say more? no woman could resist the charm in this one!!! splendid write!!! <3 Emarie

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