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Dec 05, 2007
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Critical Revenge*
a night to remember to forget
Cake crafted like crap was served on
road kill look alike place mats
and the punch was served not from a
punch bowl but from a loo
poets read puns,limiricks,and roast
You just Had to have been there....
Deragatory multi-medium art
entertaining as well as uncomfortable
but really you had to have been there...
ugly culture was exposed artistically that night
The critiques didn't know what to write!
— IKnowNoBox, Dec 05, 2007
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Critiques
theladyblue
18 years 6 months ago
oh im afraid i have been there...*sigh*
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
LLaL
Fearlessfox
18 years 6 months ago
Witty
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
Thank you Fearless
j_h08
18 years 6 months ago
A C R O S T I C S
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
Oh yes that is in there as well
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