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The Fall

 

Dew lies happily on fog kissed grass As the sun fans midnight’s azure skies A golden hue and awakes the day The trees are still proud in their half worn Summer coats but Jack is coming Tickling roots where they burrow In forgotten fields, rabbits and mice Find new life and prepare for young as Birds of a feather flock together and fly Far, far away from frost bitten nights And nests of icicle sticks and snowflake beds Spring’s fawn now dons the bud of adulthood And all too soon this innocence will be challenged By man’s need to prove dominance and skill    
— theladyblue, Dec 06, 2007

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meic

18 years 6 months ago

Man - the blot on the

Man - the blot on the [idyllic and prettily penned] landscape. The ending says it all without any further comment from me. Merry Christmas & Happy New Year Nadolig llawen & blwyddyn newydd dda geseënde Kersfees & gelukkige nuwejaar Mike
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

and what a blot…if only it

and what a blot...if only it were for need rather than greed and fun...i suppose i will never understand the blood sport of death but i have grown to see the beauty in it...somewhat...thanks bunches again!!!! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie

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