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pitiful Joe

 

what Duncan Joe's so gained in four-

score years of hoarded age,

 

he's lost in sapient sage ...

 

and waxed a sort of daily

coarsely Gothic weather gauge.

 

I'd say his cured-clay flowerpot

has come quite planted empty;

 

so at now his skull's a wholly

vacuumed fully vacant lot

 

set out to sit in ruthless sun,

its earthen grounds thus left to rot.

 

— barbsdad2003, Dec 13, 2007

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themoonman

themoonman

18 years 6 months ago

Hello

Poor Joe, thank you for sharing your work....nicely done.

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