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meic
Dec 13, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

INSIGHT

INSIGHT

"See Naples and die"
the saying goes: a splendid sight I do not doubt.   Ah, but …

If you had seen
what I had seen
in just two moments
in just two eyes
you could happily die
a thousand times.
— meic, Dec 13, 2007
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purplemoondoll

18 years 5 months ago

What did you see?

I like this - it begs a follow up question. What did you see? Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

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