"Love" has been selected for publication @wikinut.com

Love
Has been selected for publication @wikinut.com

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A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Dec 18, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

meic

18 years 5 months ago

I think you’ve caught

I think you've caught every facet of love [and its disreputable sister, lust] in this piece. It reads like a wise kind of sermon, or maybe some sound avuncular advice from someone who has lived a full life, and chooses to share his experience. Mike Photo: Me in my thirties - face furniture, version 2. All that hair! For graphic art please visit: http://www.flickr.com/photos/7911705@N07

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 4 months ago

I am still very young In this game of life and love

I some times thinks the rules placed on one by ones self can be over powering but I often times reflect back and think and then rethink But, I know of no greater sting then this monster here it's sting is rivialed by none Love or at least the lost of Love Thanks Mike Sinbad/Donnie

themoonman

18 years 5 months ago

Wise words

I couldn't have said it better, but I wish I had... thanks for posting....

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 4 months ago

Thank you much Moon Man

A great, complaiment I so do apreaicate it Donnie/Sinbad it is such a honor when the others in this group comitt for there are so many here including yourself who know more of what I am seeking to find and such comitts keep me focus on continueing the journey to be come better at it and learn more about it thanxs again

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