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BURNED IN HELL

ONCE I WAS IN HEAVEN

AND THEN I FELL

FELL SO HARD

I WENT TO HELL

I BURNED SO BAD

AND I LOST MY HALO

MY WINGS ON FIRE

AND HORNS LIKE A DEVILS

I SCREAM FOR HELP

UP TO GOD

BUT I AM TOO FAR DOWN

HERE COMES THE DEVIL

AND HE SAYS SOMETHING

BUT NOW ALL I DO

IS BURN IN HELL

— thomassbaby, Dec 19, 2007

Critiques

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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 5 months ago

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i really liked this poem.
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thomassbaby

18 years 5 months ago

thanx

thanx i actually wrote it when i was 15

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