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Jun 22, 2011
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Under The Cover Of Darkness
Under the cover of darkness
Secrets are made
hidden like treasures
in the heart of earth's core
Secrets are like diamonds
dirty, tainted with impurities of life
Secrets like ocean jewels
when purged of it's sins
makes the heart shines
like pearls on the necks of stars
Secrets made and shared
under the cover of darkness
when revealed at dawn
draws the light of truth
on mountaintops
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I wrote this on my iPhone notepad then copied and paste so the format is a little off
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
loved
14 years ago
i once also wrote
under the cover of darkness
newly marrieds
did u or could u read it
please.
Barbara Writes
14 years ago
Loved
I haven't read it but I will just
Send me a link to it in your comment
Barbara Writes
14 years ago
Loved
I haven't read it but I will
Barbara Writes
14 years ago
Ian
Thanks for the two suggestions I will make some edits
loved
14 years ago
i have justupdated it its called
under the dim lights
Geezer
14 years ago
i agree...
with Ian, you should drop a few of the secrets, and I'm not sure about the line with diamonds. I thought diamonds were supposed to be a symbol of purity, and clear. ~ Gee