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To Turn

 

At times

          I turn a corner,

Sometimes

          I turn a page.

 

I've turned

          a lot the former

To reach

          my current age.

 

— barbsdad2003, Dec 26, 2007

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Country/Region: USA

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

simple structure

yet attractive to the eye and mind. A lifetime of words upon pages is a wonderful experience. ~ Ronda
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Are you sure you are not

a Japanese poet with a penchant for rhyme? I bet your garden is eloquent, with room for weeds. cheers, Jess

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